Any english majors here??

[CRX-YEM]

Well I need some help from someone that's a proficient writer. I would like a one page paper critiqued and checked for grammatical errors. Anyone up to helping me out or know of an online forum that more relevant to my request ?

 

[95b16coupe]

i'm a pretty good writer, go ahead and send it over. or post it here.

 

[Hondadude141]

Taken 4 semesters of College writing and got A's in every single class, I can help if you'd like

 

[CRX-YEM]

This is what I was asked to write

Concentration Rationale: (Please use complete sentences and proper grammar and punctuation).

1.Define your goals for pursuing the degree that you have indicated above. (This may include any specific plans for graduate study, career goals, personal enrichment, and employment opportunities.)

2.Answer either a or b.
a.Discuss the focus of your CPS by explaining why you chose the elective credits that you have included in your concentration (100-300 words).
b.Discuss a few of the key courses or credits that you have included in the concentration and how they relate to your career, educational, or personal goals (100-300 words)


Attached is my document

 

[jeffie7]

I be no good at inglish, lo siento

 

[reikoshea]

Just downloaded it. I was an english major before i switched to technology

 

[reikoshea]

revised. the document is pretty much in it's same state. my critiques/suggestions are highlighted.

 

[CRX-YEM]

thanks for the help, I'll review tonight, see were I can make improvements based on your feedback.
The main purpose of this paper is really geared toward a graduation audit almost like a writing proficiency exam

 

[Hondadude141]

revised. the document is pretty much in it's same state. my critiques/suggestions are highlighted.

He suggested the same stuff I was going to. With what he suggested that will make one hell of a paper.