hello again. i've made this halloween video featuring jason vorhees! see what you think!
video here - http://www.vimeo.com/clip=16433
video here - http://www.vimeo.com/clip=16433
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jason vorhees...dude from halloween and jason x...ya know, hockey mask
wow...just wow....yer knife is crooked
you getting killed = your best video yet
Nice movie anyway.
You could have used some blood on the knife and used some fake blood on your face instead of ketchup....LOL.
You could have the best of everything else (you don't, but at least that's attainable) but if you keep your production values low nobody will ever want to watch your shit.
no blood on the victim (other than the mouth) a brutal stabbing death would produce MUCH more blood
that brings me to the next point... the stabbing seemed weak and had no heart behind it... it was more poking
and the screaming that was there just didnt sound convincing at all... a muffled "ahhh.... ahhhhhhh" just doesnt have the fear for your life and painful stabbing death feel to it
but the victim and the killer were wearing the EXACT same outfit same turtle neck, same adidas warm up pants, same undershirt hanging out the back... (should have thrown a costume change in there)
also the part where the the victim opened the door, half entered, dropped the knife, and fell backwards... not very good acting, and definatly not convincing... should have had him go all the way through the door, or at least most of the way... that way it would look more like he encountered the killer, not like he had a seizure in the doorway
ou made it out of your room, and i give you credit for that, but the setting still didnt really have the right feel to it (a relativly clean room with seemingly well maintained plants doesnt really fit the "this place scares the hell out of me"... unless maybe you have severe plant allergies??)... still gotta work on getting outside and finding some better locations to film at
it was nice man. good stuff.
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This was probably the best one i've seen yet. Still sucks though.
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did you take the video down or something? nothing is coming up...